Cut Diamond is my first suite of poems, written or compiled in 2008.
It was in response mainly to the loss of a very good friend during 2007.
Some of these words have been put to music.
eloise_dunwell@hotmail.com
Cut Diamond is my first suite of poems, written or compiled in 2008.
It was in response mainly to the loss of a very good friend during 2007.
Some of these words have been put to music.
eloise_dunwell@hotmail.com
As I said somewhere in there, I love you poetry, it’s so alive in the best possible ways. I don’t feel I can comment on the order yet…this may be better experienced as hard copy. But I will reread later. I have just finished the whole list and feel that I need some perspective. Congratulations, however. I thoroughly enjoyed the reading and think that your work is very sophisticated and very touching and very beautiful!!!!!!!
Tomorrow, I will lay out all the poems – think about something like – morning, afternoon, evening, night as divisions or perhaps different states of consciousness. The poems don’t fit the simple division of night/dreams/sleep. You could alternate between sleeping and waking.
Also let’s skip Extension 1 tomorrow. Focus on your major work!